IELTS writing samples

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not
satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take

Dear Mr.John,

This is jagadish, i am one of your tenant in your house addressed sector 44, Sweden. I have been living in the house since couple of years. I met you on few occasions with regard to the rent.

I would like to bring to your notice that i am not happy with the furniture in the house. The Furniture i too old now. It is posing a wornout look with cracks and is in a dilapidated condition. Because of this the interior of the house looks poor. The cracks in the furniture has become home to bugs. Due to this we are unable to keep our cloths in them. The furniture need immediate attention.

Request you to kindly look into the matter, possibly take necessary steps on the rework of furniture. I will be glad if you could consider my request.

Hope to meet you soon on a positive note.

Yours Sincerely,
Jagadish

IELTS - Writing Task 1

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.

It is absolutely correct that by everyday use of computers by childrens, it has more negative effects than positive. I agree with the argument.

Stating this i am not against the use of computers. yes they are very essential for the growth of the children at the academic level. they help the children in many ways by providing upto date information on what is happening around the world through internet and also by assisting thme in the preparation of presentation and charts.

But working on computers for a longer period of time affects the eye sight, which inturn leads to headache and other ailments. By seeing compueter screen for a long time will have huge pressure on the neurons of the eye and will weeken them. Thus au a very early age children are forced to wear spects. I have seen my neighbours child who used to spend lot of time before computer playing games. Now his vision became poor and wears spects to compensate the loss. It also affected his studies and resulted in poor academic grades.

I strongly believe that parents should take proper measures on children using computers. They have to educate children to use computers properly. Especially parents need  to see if their children are playing games on the computers, because most childrens get addicted to computer games and it will be very difficult to overcome it. Hence parents should advice them to spend only 2 hrs everyday on computers and rest of the time on outdoor play and studies.

Mother's Love!! Can anyone explain...........

The answer in no, the reason is clear, love of mother is so much that it cannot be explained in words, there is no limit... Let me tell you a small but true story which i hope will make your soul to weep.

It so happened when an earthquake shook southern china's small village. The quake devastated the entire village, almost everyone died except one. The houses were ruined to debris. The rescue team were searching for survivors and one of the rescue officer with his crew entered a house to see for survivors, there he saw a woman in an unusual posture. She was dead and there was nothing the team could do so they walked out of the house. But the officer was thinking about the posture in which the woman died. She was bent with her two arms folded as if she was holding or covering something. She died as the ceiling fell on her hitting her head and back.The officer again went inside the house and on close observation, he saw a baby boy wrapped in a blanket covered in the arms of her mother. He was still sleeping unaware that his mother is no more. On removing the blanket from the baby boy they found a mobile phone with a message "if you do survive remember that i love you".

This is not just a story or incident, but it shows a mother love for her child which is beyond any explanation.

Thus love is not just a noun, it is a verb,it is not just a feeling but it is caring, helping, sacrifice.............